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Aphrodite 12-02-2003 03:03 PM

Nightscape
 
Nightscape


How quickly one forgets the stars
Passing years replace the innocence
Of lying, staring up at nothing
Weeping, only moon bears witness.
She cared not then and cares not now
Cold companion to my stillness
Barren heart, no longer loves
Nor does she, princess of ice.
Far am I from those days
When luxury I had for staring
At the stars, and caring not
I live or die, it mattered little.
Will I lay again on that same porch-step
Clad in sparkling frost
Wishing that the end come sooner
Fall asleep, under the moon.

Dixie 12-02-2003 04:06 PM

this is very pretty and very well-written. great writing style, as well. keep posting!

Aphrodite 12-02-2003 04:47 PM

Thanks, I will :)

Esen 12-02-2003 06:28 PM

welcome to the lit board!
Grest poem :)

Aphrodite 12-02-2003 06:44 PM

Thanks, and for the welcome :)

riptide4070 12-05-2003 05:49 PM

that was very deep. bold words that speak from heart to heart!

Aphrodite 12-06-2003 02:29 AM

Thanks :)


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