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11-05-2003, 11:24 AM
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Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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Waking
I imagine you are here
I feel your presence in every pore of my body I feel you gently pressed against me In a loving embrace Your breath gently playing on my neck Lips gently kissing my temple Hands roaming at will Over my body as you claim me For you and only you I awaken in the morning chill The sky is overcast with low gray clouds The only head on my pillow is mine The sheets to my back are cold and uninviting The curtains flutter as a cold breeze blows through the window Awakening without you here Is like dieing a little inside I need your fire that awakens the flame That burns inside me for you
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 11-05-2003 at 08:16 PM.. |
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11-05-2003, 04:27 PM
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TFPer formaly known as Chauncey
Location: North East
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Wow,
How you do it time after time is amazing. I really really admire your writing style. Everyone has something that they truly like. some kind of music they can relate to some kind of something that always touches them. Your writing does this for me. You write in a way that is so beautiful and so true to yourself it is amazing. Sometimes I feel like you should be posting on the exhibition boards. You share so much of your talents. This poem really took my breath away. Thank you.
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