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riptide4070

11-04-2003 11:30 PM

it's so hard...

the questions go forth
answers seeking truth

why do we do this?
to each other when we meet?

the pain stings with pride
and yet the inner being we hide
so problematic, our schemes
veiled beneath the golden dreams

answers do not abound
fury of voice and sound
we shall seek until are found
that is so unrelieving.....

emmdubbs

11-05-2003 04:26 AM

rip..thats great...it sounds like it could be part of a battle rap...if you were to lay down the right beat it sounds like it could be an old 80's MC (run dmc) type of thing..

ForgottenKnight

11-05-2003 07:42 PM

Good work! Keep it up!

J.R.V.A.

11-06-2003 05:15 AM

I like this. Thanks for sharing

SSJwrestler

11-06-2003 08:31 PM

Nice work

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