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My first and last attempt at a story.
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And you realize that is'nt your fingers.......
WOOWWWEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! Hmmmmmmmmmm..... I really hope this is'nt your last story....And you said you could'nt write |
the close personal emphasis and attention to detail are what makes writing such a deep psychological experience. this is a real cool example of very focused work.
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very well done. I love it.. You really should write more..
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That was a great read. Enough build-up to the action without drawing the story out too long. Very intense.
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Thank you all for your feed back. I still keep coming back and tinkering with pulling it off the board but something keeps me keeping it here. heh
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................damn and my girlfriend's at school!!!
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Very nice, I could put myself right there with you.
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well written, excellent sensory detail, and very provocative. just reading it made me wish.......well, nevermind, but don't stop writing with this one
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Don't pull it down, it's probably the best written thing on here. It would be a tragedy if you didn't write more. Trust me, I'm a professional :)
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the story was excellent! something about the style of writing that really keeps you interested. I hope you keep up the great work, I only wish i could write that well. Thanks!
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That was an excelent piece of writing. Amazing use of words, that almost made me feel as if I was there watching you. Keep on writing, that was great, thanks.
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