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10-15-2003, 07:45 PM
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Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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Slipping away
As I hold her shaking form
I can feel her life drain from her small body I feel as if my heart is breaking I am losing her But I can not stop her passage This was a more human death Our eyes lock A look of pure terror in her eyes I feel so helpless I could have done so much more for her But she is gone No one can console me For in my very hands she died I could not stop it Though I will with every drop of life in me To instill it into her now limp form And yet she simply slipped away
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel |
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10-16-2003, 10:45 AM
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Location: Boone, NC
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reminded me of the movie "Tears of the Sun." The movie made me cry at the end when I watched it last night. I did not cry while reading your work but felt the emotion of the "life slipping away."
good stuff!!!
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