Drums of War
 

Determined
I march on to the drums of war
Soul's blood spilt
I march on to the drums of war
Battles waged inside my head
I march on to the drums of war
Leaving parts of me for dead
I march on to the drums of war
Severity
I march on to the drums of war
Mercilessly
I march on to the drums of war
Ashamed to see
I march on to the drums of war
Eternity
I march on to the drums of war
Flesh is calling out to me
I march on to the drums of war
Sin is calling lustfully
I march on to the drums of war
Confusion setting in on me.
I march on to the drums of war
I march on determinedly.

reminds me of the bad guys in science fiction/fantasy novels

Very good, Thanks

Great stuff.. Im usually not a big fan of poetry, but this has a good feel to it.

This is a good poem. I like how you repeat that one line over and over. It sets up a good anapestic rhythm. I think it was anapest, anyway. I sometimes get the rhythm names mixed up.