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Memnoch · 10-09-2003, 07:51 PM

She knelt down in front of him, her breasts resting on his thick, hairy thighs. He laid back on the bed - comfortable, relaxed. Already, his cock was fully engorged, peaking at its entire four and a half inch length. She smiled up at him, even knowing he couldn't see her face - he probably wouldn't have cared anyway. She took his prick in her hand, leading it into the warm, moist recess of her mouth. Her tongue swirled all around it, wetting the head and shaft, massaging gently with her lips. She slid him in and out of her mouth, reaching her other hand under to finger that little space of flesh between his scrotum and asshole. She grinned - well, as best as a girl can grin with a dick in her mouth - hearing him groan, as usual. She pumped his prick with her hand, flicking her tongue over the tip, removing her hand from underneath his balls. Moving down, she ran her tongue up and down the shrivelled skin, the disgusting taste in her mouth now making her nearly gag. It was worth it though, wasn't it? He was happy, and that's all that mattered. She felt his body shudder from her gentle gratifications. He was so close to coming - she could feel the blood pumping against her lips as she took him in her mouth one last time.

And as he poured forth his semen into his waiting receptacle, he moaned not in pleasure, but absolute horror and agony as he felt the cold knife tip sear into the base of his penis. The pain, hot and cruel, swept through his entire body. Ever-so-briefly, he forgot about his pain, as he looked down at the girl who had sworn so many times her love and devotion to him. What...what was she chewing? Darkness overcame him, and even moreso, a darkness had overcome her.

edmos1 · 10-10-2003, 12:12 PM

I did not see that coming

macmanmike6100 · 10-10-2003, 08:48 PM

wow i liked that; that was definitely a twist[ed] ending

Angel · 10-11-2003, 03:15 PM

Well now. That took me off guard. Good job at switching our mindset so quickly.
Won't piss her off again!

UglySamuel · 10-11-2003, 08:45 PM

Oh gosh. Haha! That made me shiver. That was absolutely wild. Hehe. Fabulous.

arcane · 10-12-2003, 02:22 AM

wow...that's all i can say

im gonna keep my eyes opened next time im getting a bj
hahaha

analog · 10-12-2003, 10:58 PM

nice switch there, i like it...

J.R.V.A. · 10-17-2003, 03:03 PM

oooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yabobo · 10-20-2003, 08:22 PM

That could be my wife someday

scarebearjinx · 10-21-2003, 12:40 PM

twisted man. i like it.

opentocomments · 10-22-2003, 04:44 PM

i hope this isnt a true story

Memnoch · 10-25-2003, 02:19 PM

Thanks to all who have commented. My head is not a pleasent place to be - sometimes I have to let these scenes out.

Eldaire · 10-29-2003, 05:37 PM

Um, ouch. Simply ouch.

Don't be so hard on yourself though. I think everyone has these images somewhere in their head. It takes great courage to let them out. It's the only way to really deal.

theguyondacouch · 10-29-2003, 05:53 PM

Whoa, thats, uhhh, creative.

*Nikki* · 10-29-2003, 06:31 PM

I too have an unpleasant head, so I know where you are coming from.

Excellent work.

thejoker130 · 10-29-2003, 07:38 PM

eek...cool...but eek

Smoey · 10-30-2003, 08:35 AM

well written, keeps you guessing til the end

10-09-2003, 07:51 PM	#1 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	Hateful Eroticism (graphic) She knelt down in front of him, her breasts resting on his thick, hairy thighs. He laid back on the bed - comfortable, relaxed. Already, his cock was fully engorged, peaking at its entire four and a half inch length. She smiled up at him, even knowing he couldn't see her face - he probably wouldn't have cared anyway. She took his prick in her hand, leading it into the warm, moist recess of her mouth. Her tongue swirled all around it, wetting the head and shaft, massaging gently with her lips. She slid him in and out of her mouth, reaching her other hand under to finger that little space of flesh between his scrotum and asshole. She grinned - well, as best as a girl can grin with a dick in her mouth - hearing him groan, as usual. She pumped his prick with her hand, flicking her tongue over the tip, removing her hand from underneath his balls. Moving down, she ran her tongue up and down the shrivelled skin, the disgusting taste in her mouth now making her nearly gag. It was worth it though, wasn't it? He was happy, and that's all that mattered. She felt his body shudder from her gentle gratifications. He was so close to coming - she could feel the blood pumping against her lips as she took him in her mouth one last time. And as he poured forth his semen into his waiting receptacle, he moaned not in pleasure, but absolute horror and agony as he felt the cold knife tip sear into the base of his penis. The pain, hot and cruel, swept through his entire body. Ever-so-briefly, he forgot about his pain, as he looked down at the girl who had sworn so many times her love and devotion to him. What...what was she chewing? Darkness overcame him, and even moreso, a darkness had overcome her. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.

10-11-2003, 03:15 PM	#4 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Well now. That took me off guard. Good job at switching our mindset so quickly. Won't piss her off again! __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-11-2003, 08:45 PM	#5 (permalink)
UglySamuel Upright Location: Over there.	Oh gosh. Haha! That made me shiver. That was absolutely wild. Hehe. Fabulous. __________________ "ROUGH ANAL SEX" -- Shouted at two Mormons on the street by myself

10-12-2003, 02:22 AM	#6 (permalink)
arcane Insane Location: SLC, UT	wow...that's all i can say im gonna keep my eyes opened next time im getting a bj hahaha __________________ <Arcane> so if you banged 2000 chicks then at least one had a pen0r?

10-17-2003, 03:03 PM	#8 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	oooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-10-2003, 12:12 PM	#2 (permalink)
edmos1 Daddy Location: Right next door to Hell	I did not see that coming

10-10-2003, 08:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
macmanmike6100 High Honorary Junkie Location: Tri-state.	wow i liked that; that was definitely a twist[ed] ending

10-12-2003, 10:58 PM	#7 (permalink)
analog Banned	nice switch there, i like it...

10-20-2003, 08:22 PM	#9 (permalink)
yabobo Lust Puppy Location: in your closet and in your head...	That could be my wife someday __________________ Why do they sterilize the needle for lethal injections? Only in America......do we use the word 'politics' to describe the process so well: 'Poli' in Latin meaning 'many' and 'tics' meaning 'bloodsucking creatures'.

10-21-2003, 12:40 PM	#10 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	twisted man. i like it.

10-22-2003, 04:44 PM	#11 (permalink)
opentocomments Psycho Location: St. Louis	i hope this isnt a true story __________________ How do we know that the sky is not green and we are all color-blind?

10-25-2003, 02:19 PM	#12 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	Thanks to all who have commented. My head is not a pleasent place to be - sometimes I have to let these scenes out. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.

10-29-2003, 05:37 PM	#13 (permalink)
Eldaire Loser Location: Davidson College, NC	Um, ouch. Simply ouch. Don't be so hard on yourself though. I think everyone has these images somewhere in their head. It takes great courage to let them out. It's the only way to really deal.

10-29-2003, 05:53 PM	#14 (permalink)
theguyondacouch salmon? Location: Outside Providence	Whoa, thats, uhhh, creative. __________________ "Lick my frozen metal ass!"

10-29-2003, 06:31 PM	#15 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	I too have an unpleasant head, so I know where you are coming from. Excellent work.

10-29-2003, 07:38 PM	#16 (permalink)
thejoker130 Insane Location: slippery rock university AKA: The left ass cheek of the world	eek...cool...but eek __________________ WHAT MORE CAN THE HARVEST HOPE FOR IF NOT FOR THE CARE OF THE REAPER MAN? ------------------------------------- I like you. When the world is mine your death will be quick and painless.

10-30-2003, 08:35 AM	#17 (permalink)
Smoey Upright	well written, keeps you guessing til the end