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fallen_angel · 10-03-2003, 09:24 PM

I close my eyes
And let the whole world pass me by
I just want to let go of this place
And run away in time
I keep asking why
When will you be mine
I cant stop thinking about you
And how I fell into your eyes
My words flow through my mind
I keep wishing I could make them dissapear
I ask myself why
But my words cant be erased
I need to find a release
So I ask why
And I close my eyes
Searching deep within
Im trying to let go
But theres something missing deep inside
All these walls trapping me
Walls of emotions I cannot describe
Memories creeping through the cracks
I see your face
The look in your eyes
I wonder how I got here
Why I let myself feel
My soul is bleeding
I want to stop feeling
Let the whole world just pass me by
So I can stop
Asking why

Angel · 10-03-2003, 09:31 PM

This is quite deep and very moving. I have been there in a big way before so it really drives home for me. Thank you for sharing.

PS...I like your sig line.

fallen_angel · 10-03-2003, 09:52 PM

thanx angel. i like honestly dont know where that sig came from, i was just writing some thoughts in my head and it just fell out. kinda like this poem, i was just depressed and was thinking how i wish i could just get away from everything and take all my words with me. thank you

ForgottenKnight · 10-05-2003, 09:55 AM

Very touching. Beautiful work.

*Nikki* · 10-05-2003, 06:18 PM

Awesome

riptide4070 · 10-15-2003, 03:44 PM

I often ask why.
good stuff!

Esen · 11-23-2003, 07:54 AM

You are a true poet.

Minx · 11-24-2003, 09:03 AM

"But there's something missing deep inside"

I like this line - it reached right out and grabbed me. Thanks for letting us see a little of yourself.

Oh....and happy birthday!

J.R.V.A. · 11-24-2003, 09:38 PM

Nice one again, thanks

10-03-2003, 09:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Asking Why I close my eyes And let the whole world pass me by I just want to let go of this place And run away in time I keep asking why When will you be mine I cant stop thinking about you And how I fell into your eyes My words flow through my mind I keep wishing I could make them dissapear I ask myself why But my words cant be erased I need to find a release So I ask why And I close my eyes Searching deep within Im trying to let go But theres something missing deep inside All these walls trapping me Walls of emotions I cannot describe Memories creeping through the cracks I see your face The look in your eyes I wonder how I got here Why I let myself feel My soul is bleeding I want to stop feeling Let the whole world just pass me by So I can stop Asking why __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 10-03-2003 at 10:27 PM..

10-03-2003, 09:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	This is quite deep and very moving. I have been there in a big way before so it really drives home for me. Thank you for sharing. PS...I like your sig line. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-03-2003, 09:52 PM	#3 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	thanx angel. i like honestly dont know where that sig came from, i was just writing some thoughts in my head and it just fell out. kinda like this poem, i was just depressed and was thinking how i wish i could just get away from everything and take all my words with me. thank you __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

10-05-2003, 09:55 AM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Very touching. Beautiful work. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-15-2003, 03:44 PM	#6 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	I often ask why. good stuff! __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

10-05-2003, 06:18 PM	#5 (permalink)
Nikki ~~~~~~~ Location: Charleston, SC	Awesome

11-23-2003, 07:54 AM	#7 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	You are a true poet. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

11-24-2003, 09:03 AM	#8 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	"But there's something missing deep inside" I like this line - it reached right out and grabbed me. Thanks for letting us see a little of yourself. Oh....and happy birthday! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

11-24-2003, 09:38 PM	#9 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Nice one again, thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart