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Rainwulf 09-15-2003 12:39 AM

what?
 
go there
i was chasing that thought then it ran away

something else dark came and took its place
what do i do?

hate? fear? forgive.. for what?
the past haunts me, jaunts me, look, see, feel..... the pain

i hurt, others, myself. hate is easier.
not hate

hate caused this
hate cant fix this

not hate?
not hate.

im confused.
your confused?

im confused!
who is who?

im him
im the other him

where did you come from?
the same place you did

we are the same?
we are the same.

help.
help yourself.

how
the past, forget it

i cant.
do it or the present and the future will be your past.

dont you see? i hurt, others and myself
so? you hurt them cos you hurt them

ok im gonna stop
you cant stop it

huh?
you cant stop what never started

what?
what?

dont do that.
well. you stop it too

dark. was good wasnt it.
yes it was. time to stop now.

but you said it never started.
it didnt.

then.... how?
look behind, inside. lower. deeper.

i see now.
but do you SEE it.

yes.
the pain is not real....

cos the emotions that caused it arent real?
correct.

who are you.
im you.

we are the same?
we are the same.

thank you.
thank you.

fallen_angel 09-22-2003 05:48 PM

WOW, dont know what to say but i actually kinda understood that. it also sounds alot familiar to something Eoywn_Vala read to me last night from her world lit. book. This is truely a masterpeice and everyone who read it and did not post is a morron not to notice that this is amazing. Thank you.

Rainwulf 09-23-2003 01:33 AM

hey thank you for that!!! it was just something that came to me, in all places, a coffee shop in the middle of a mall.

minyn 09-29-2003 06:39 PM

Im so glad im not the only one who has those kind of moments.... the voices are fun friends i tell you!

J.R.V.A. 09-30-2003 08:06 PM

Thanks for sharing. Good work

ForgottenKnight 09-30-2003 09:41 PM

Very good work!
Yes, very good!
I concure!
The general sensus with all my voices seems to be that this is very good. Thanks for sharing from all of us voices in here.

Angel 10-01-2003 03:36 PM

This almost gives the feel of an affair with another or oneselves other self....
I liked the impact and the emotion.
~Angel~

riptide4070 10-29-2003 01:16 PM

I've had moments like that with myself. I never wrote down the conversations though. Your work was a look into the inner psyche, simply amazing!!!

mb99usa 10-29-2003 01:27 PM

Very cool. I have conversations with myself like that all the time. Never thought of writing it down.

*Nikki* 10-29-2003 06:33 PM

Nice;)


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