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Old 09-02-2003, 04:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Angel

Depressed, nose-bleed, crossed eyes
staring down on me
crushed lips, finger tips
brings me back
drugged persona, mix amonia
take a swallow of heaven
lie back, cigarette
dream of touching a cloud
stolen sunshine, razer blade
plundge in and watch it fade
scream out toxic waste
melt a mold to paste
fallen angel, death by dutch
sweep up the feathers
and watch them blow away

Sing out a being of light, of love
a one winged angel of lust
parted by passion and sweat
of blood and of tears
tear away your pain
hold close to a razer blade
sleep during the day
a fallen angel on it's way
following the light of the night
moon lit, with death in sight
crying out confessions of blood
walls tainted, fainted
in a heap of feathers
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Old 09-02-2003, 06:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Nice work, thanks
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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Old 09-03-2003, 05:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: There's no place like home..
there are no words to describe the emotion this piece conveys to me except that it is great
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DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it
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Old 09-03-2003, 05:33 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
In my heart lies an image of a fallen angel, I must admit that this is somewhat opposite to my vision, but i must admit also, that this is equal to mine in many ways. thank you for expressing in words i would never have found.
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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