a little poetry.
 

I'll post more later, just a taste.

this one has two english and two loosely translated french verses. I will put the translation to english next to the line.


C'est seulement vous que j'adore
(It is you I adore)


Your name rolls off my tongue, like love.

I whisper it to the Gods above, I'm shunned.

They know that you are a Goddess, as do I.

So I speak in tongues, for with you and I this could be love.


Ma princesse, vous êtes mon soleil qui enlève l'obscurité.
...(my princess you are the sun that removes obscurity)

Vous êtes l'arc-en-ciel après la pluie.
(You are the rainbow after the rain)

Vous m'apportez seulement la joie, jamais la douleur.
(You bring me only the joy, never the pain. )

Je souris everytime que je chuchote votre nom. Vous j'adore.
(I smile everytime that I whisper your name. It is you I adore.)


Is this my Destiny to desire you? I do.

My desire and devotion is true. Will it do?

I mix up a potion, with my words, for you.

So I speak in tongues? For with you and I this could be love.


Vos yeux coulent comme un océan, dans à jamais, dans votre âme.
(Your eyes flow as an ocean, in forever, in your soul. )

Ils sont les choses les plus éblouissantes que je jamais ai vu.
(They are the most dazzling things I have ever seen.)

Je veux dévisager dans eux à jamais, avant que je dors, et quand je me réveille.
(I want to stare at in them forever, before I sleep, and when I awaken. )

et je veux que vous ait su que vous j'adore.
(And I want you to know that you I adore.)

hope you guys and gals enjoy!

I love the alternation between the English and French. In fact, the French bits are my favorite (partially due to French sounding so damnably romantic, at least to an English speaker), and your rhythm works quite well despite the general lack of rhyme (which works for you, even when you DO rhyme) and balance (although that's part of its' appeal, for me - the fact that the lines aren't "equal" works for you, as well, strangely enough).

Anyways, thanks for sharing.

Hope to hear more outa' you.

I really like this line:
I mix up a potion, with my words, for you.

Thanks for sharing your stuff

OH MY GOD would I love to hear someone say that (in french) whilst music softly playing in the background. Dude, the part in french is totally heart melting.

Come to think of it, I'd like that hawt seksi elf chick from lord of the rings to say that part.

/heart melting

two more
 

This one is old.

A Kiss


Deep, Dark, a passionate kiss. Throwing my mind into a twist.
Feel the warm tingle set in, I never want this kiss to end.
Warmth flows through me from your lips. I finaly discovered what I've missed.
Your body held so close to mine, lips interlocked, souls intertwined.
So Romantic, So divine. You're the only star that I see shine.
Why do I feel so afraid? Bliss overwhelms me like a wave.
If you wish well then I am your slave, I wonder how do I explain?
Emotions long locked away, past mistakes with you I've made.
Your kiss feeding an old flame, then it flares up and who's to blame?
Fourteen seconds and then you leave, I decided that this is not a dream.
Fourteen seconds, this must be real, cause I can't explain just how I feel.

For Adorabella



Been walking for days
in the shadow of my mind
trying to hide from the light
that the sunshine left behind
when you were here last
in my thoughts
when the smile slid onto my lips
like the morning dews sweet drips
from the limbs of the trees
to the blades of the grass
such a sweet, sweet kiss
it is
such a wonderful bliss


Been pondering for days
In the thoughts I left behind
the reminders of you
in my eyes, your smell
still here like a hidden effigy
to a love falling from the sky
like snow flakes
when the sun began to fade away
like a flower withers and slowly fades
only a reminder remains in the way
of the thought being forgotten
in the circle of life
it remains
forgotten in the wind

:thumbsup:

All I know in French is how to count up to four or five and random phrases like "the cat is on the table", "the mouse is under the table", and "the monkey is in the tree". And I somehow don't think that women would be swooning over me if I came up to them and said that to them.... Damn!

I especially like the last one...nice work!

I'm goanna memorise that stuff... especially the final lines... that is great stuff for the girls man. ;)