*Nikki*

Still sitting here and listening
To what was once my life
This song that once was ours
Like a twisting knife
Even to this day
Just hearing your voice
Tears open that hole in my heart
The one I thought I healed
I wish you would stop lingering
In my thoughts
In my mind
I wish you would take those six years
Erase them from time
I think of every second
You were a part of me
I wish that every second
I could now be set free
From the memories
That never seem to give up
Adding to my grief
I want to ask you why
I want to know what broke inside
Why you felt the need to lie
I want to take every ounce of pain
Inject it in your heart
A place you can't ever let go
Somewhere you can't hide
Your whole life you will sit and wonder
How it is that you could let me go
You had it all in front of you
Shame you didn't know
Now it is to late to reach over
And slide your hand into mine
Someone else is sitting here
Someone else is at my side
Leave me go and set me free
Don't come calling
Don't remind me
Don't bring back the past to kill my joy
So many years of pain I spent on you
Leave me alone
Let me be

sub zero

Reading through that I started to feel all sad, but then when I got to the end, I noticed that your sig rhymed with the last part of your poem. I'm sorry, but that made me LOL.

Your poem is really heart-felt though. Sounds like a true story or something. Is it a true story?

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*Nikki*

Yes that is funny about my sig. I didn't notice it until you mentioned it.

100% True.

J.R.V.A.

Your writing always makes me feel. Thank you for sharing a part of you with me.

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

Esen

Yea, I really enjoyed that it was a real plea.
I dug it man-
It was just one of those pieces that wound up being very well balanced and moving.
Its a touch of your talents from inside.

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What is everyone doing in my room?

rogue49

sorry for your pain & conflict.
I hope it will fade soon.

Mephex

Like a knife. I loved it, thank you

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He who is void of virtuous attachments in private life is, or very soon will be, void of all regard for his country.
There is seldom an instance of a man guilty of betraying his country, who had not before lost the feeling of moral obligations in his private connections.
-Samuel Adams

Seer666

Blood. ::looks at chest:: My blood....

In other words, "Ouch!". Very nicely done. Keep posting.

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I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

Memnoch

"I want to ask you why
I want to know what broke inside
Why you felt the need to lie"

I found this particular set of verse to be incredibly well balanced and rhymed. The rhythm flows *just right*. I love the imagery of "what broke inside".

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MaGlC_MaN

that's really good

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