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Esen 08-05-2003 04:43 PM

Czernobog insprired me to post his
 
Czernobog inspired me to post this.
I wrote this a long time ago, and well his posts made remember a time earlier in my life.
I had to look for this one but found it

this is from 2/27/95

Never Loved

Loved
never loved
in your arms
never your arms
trees
grass
suns
moons
only moons
silver moons
blue moons
no moons
never moons
stars
sometimes stars
only scars
ripping
deceiving
crying
fucking
never needing
never needing
can't need
I can't
never
almost never
tomorrow
today
today's gone
i'm gone
aleays gone
disapeared
can't see
impossible
won't see
not me
blind
keller
blind
hell
here
now
die
how
goodbye
never goodbye
always high
high
high
high
lower
falling
lower
dropping
falling
ever lower
down
way way
down
loved
never loved

Czernobog 08-05-2003 04:54 PM

It honors me that my works inspire you. I'm glad you enjoy them, as I enjoy this.

SaltPork 08-05-2003 07:18 PM

Simple, yet powerful. I'm glad you were inspired.

Esen 08-06-2003 02:02 AM

one quick note though.
i was inspired to post it :)
I actually wrote that poem back in 1995
lol

feels wierd to say back in 1995 HEH HEH

thank you

J.R.V.A. 08-07-2003 09:28 PM

This is awesome. I like the one word style, and the way you used them. Thanks


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