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numberfive · 07-22-2003, 12:50 AM

Gazing lovingly into your eyes
Ignoring the hate staring back
Wondering if things will ever be the same
While knowing, at the same time, that they wont
Wishing for a better day
Hoping for a better tomarrow
Moving for a better future
One with me and you
And us, together

fallen_angel · 07-22-2003, 12:01 PM

thats beautiful, and the fact that you still care so deeply to look past the hatred tells a lot about your character. thanx for sharing

Eowyn_Vala · 07-23-2003, 02:28 PM

My one thought was "if only", I don't know why. I really liked it and wish you the best of luck. I guess the ''if only" was in reference to the part about being together in the future. If the person hates you it will take a lot to break down that hate. Then again if your love is strong enough and if they love you enough to forget their hate, then the future isn't "if only."

Angel · 07-23-2003, 04:38 PM

There is nothing more painful than seeing hate reflecting in the one you loves eyes. Yet you manage to portray hope for tomorrow. Nice work.

J.R.V.A. · 07-24-2003, 06:35 AM

Yes, I know how you feel. Been there before.
Thanks

numberfive · 07-24-2003, 07:20 PM

Ah, thanks for the responses.

maximus · 07-24-2003, 07:28 PM

wow, that is about how i feel right now. why cant love just work out like it should?

tv. · 07-24-2003, 09:21 PM

that is nice

numberfive · 07-25-2003, 12:56 AM

I think I'm over her, but theres this new girl. Well, I'm not good at explaining these things, just read on:

I think I'm in love with this girl
The way she smiles and how just one word
One single word, effortlessly tossed into the air
Is enough to make the day, night, afternoon..
Brighter, better, fantastic

Her beauty, I tell you
It almost inexplicable
Her hips swaying, gently left, gently right
Enticing, but almost too graceful to touch
Left, right, left, right

Her smile, her laugh, the way she blushes
They're signs, like everything's going to be ok
It's more than just hope now, it's like a fact
And I'm believing

Man, I think I'm in love with this girl.

Eowyn_Vala · 07-25-2003, 10:38 PM

*sigh* I'm speechless! That was beautiful.

07-22-2003, 12:50 AM	#1 (permalink)
numberfive You + Me = Us Location: California dreaming...	My feelings for you Gazing lovingly into your eyes Ignoring the hate staring back Wondering if things will ever be the same While knowing, at the same time, that they wont Wishing for a better day Hoping for a better tomarrow Moving for a better future One with me and you And us, together

07-22-2003, 12:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	thats beautiful, and the fact that you still care so deeply to look past the hatred tells a lot about your character. thanx for sharing __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

07-23-2003, 02:28 PM	#3 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	My one thought was "if only", I don't know why. I really liked it and wish you the best of luck. I guess the ''if only" was in reference to the part about being together in the future. If the person hates you it will take a lot to break down that hate. Then again if your love is strong enough and if they love you enough to forget their hate, then the future isn't "if only." __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

07-23-2003, 04:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	There is nothing more painful than seeing hate reflecting in the one you loves eyes. Yet you manage to portray hope for tomorrow. Nice work. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

07-24-2003, 06:35 AM	#5 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Yes, I know how you feel. Been there before. Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

07-24-2003, 07:20 PM	#6 (permalink)
numberfive You + Me = Us Location: California dreaming...	Ah, thanks for the responses.

07-24-2003, 07:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
maximus Crazy Location: Pa	wow, that is about how i feel right now. why cant love just work out like it should? __________________ i don't want to be lonely, i just want to be alone.

07-24-2003, 09:21 PM	#8 (permalink)
tv. Tilted	that is nice

07-25-2003, 12:56 AM	#9 (permalink)
numberfive You + Me = Us Location: California dreaming...	I think I'm over her, but theres this new girl. Well, I'm not good at explaining these things, just read on: I think I'm in love with this girl The way she smiles and how just one word One single word, effortlessly tossed into the air Is enough to make the day, night, afternoon.. Brighter, better, fantastic Her beauty, I tell you It almost inexplicable Her hips swaying, gently left, gently right Enticing, but almost too graceful to touch Left, right, left, right Her smile, her laugh, the way she blushes They're signs, like everything's going to be ok It's more than just hope now, it's like a fact And I'm believing Man, I think I'm in love with this girl.

07-25-2003, 10:38 PM	#10 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	sigh I'm speechless! That was beautiful. __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it