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This has more ideas then acutal sences but any type of ciritsm would be nice.

so the protagonist is going to be male, late teens early twenty. Now the set up for this is that this guy has had no real life problems or experiences and that he feels that if he doesn't have one soon that he will be missing out and that he won't feel apart of the club.
INT. THE MOVIE STARTS IN A DENNYS LATE AT NIGHT MC AND ANOTHER FRIEND ARE THERE TALKING ABOUT, AND EVENT THAT HAPPENED WHEN THEY WERE KIDS, AND HOW THE PROTAGONIST HAD A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT IDEA ABOUT WHAT WAS GOING ON THEN ANY OTHER PERSON.
MC
You know what I think is so weird about us.
JAKE
What?
MC
that fact that when we were younger you all had this inside knowledge of the serious things that were happening between the rest of the group.
AMBER
Name something.
MC
Like that crush that erin had on you, I had no idea that any of the had happened. Jeff and I were like in our own little world.
AMBER
Hey you don't have to worry about that, you shouldn't look back and regret what happened at all. I can remember times as a kid when my parents would shelter me fromthings. Like this one time I can remember being in a car and bullets being fired and my dad yelled at me to get on the floor. The weird part about all of this is that I don't remember being scared.
I was so sheltered from the world around me that bullets didn't scared me, and when my bubble burst that was a hard thing to go through. So like you shouldn't be so fast to get
out of that bubble. You shouldn't worry about what was going on between the others just
know that you had fun and leave it at that.
JAKE
Yea dude it wasn't a big deal or anything.
MC
Wow
MC is slowly forumlates his thought’s he knows that he had to walk lightly on what he is about to say.
MC
Okay amber I totally understand what you are telling me and I think that you are
right but I think that you misunderstood what I was saying. All I was saying was that there
was a ton of stuff that happened all around me and I just didn't see it. I am okay with
that and all but it still stands that, I wasn't told about all this because you guys didn't
think that I was mature enough and that you guys didn't tell me stuff like that because you
all were having these big ordeals, crisis, problems when you were younger.
JAKE
don't feel bad about that. It was just easier to talk to other people who had gone through
something hard then someone who hadn’t..
MC getting excited about proving a point.
MC
That is exactly what I am talking about you guys didn't share with me because I hadn’t
had any major life experience and that held me back.
AMBER
No, you were lucky because you didn't have to deal with any of that. You got to live
in your world and play with us. Don’t feel bad about not having a
major experience
MC
But I do and nothing will change that fact, except if I were to have my own .. .I need to
my own life experience.
JAKE
You can't just go and find a life experience.
MC
Just go with me a second. ... Right i think you can, you could all we need to do is something extreme.
AMBER
I am with jake on this one.
MC
oh... come on guys we can make this happen come on,. ... okay here is what we are
going to do. We are going to rent an RV and go on a completely random road trip and the
experience will prevent it's self.
JAKE
And you really think that this will happen on the road trip
MC
absolutely how could it not
JAKE
I can’t believe you, I;m in
AMBER pauses for a second before answering
AMBER
fine lets go get wild.
SO AFTER THIS CONVERSATION THE WHOLE MOVIE JUMPS INTO MOCUMENTARY FORM. FIRST THEY TRY AND GET SOME MORE FRIENDS TO COME WITH THEM SOME DO SOME DON;T THEY ASSEMBLE A GROUP OF PEOPLE TWO GIRLS 3 GUYS. MC, JAKE, AMBER, KELLY, AND ALEX. THEN THEY START OFF.
SCENE -> THEY TRY AND CON THE RV PLACE INTO GIVING THEM A DISCOUNT BECAUSE THEY ARE FILMING A DOCUMENTARY. THEY GET IT SOMEHOW.


Why do porn stars shave their “area” scene
INT. THEY HAVE BEEN DRIVING FOR A WHILE NOW. ALL OF THEM HAVE GOTTEN INTO THERE GROOVE, THE SCENE STARTS RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CONVERSATION.
ALEX
Why do pornstars shave there “area”?
A mixture of laughter and, confusion ensues from the group.
KELLY
Wow, do you think about porstars all the time or just now.
ALEX
No just right now it just hit me that most of them don’t have hair. I never really noticed it before.
KELLY
Well I am not sure, AMBER your the porn aficionado aren’t you.
AMBER
No... Please you watch more porn then I do. I have no idea why porn stars shave there area I know why people might do it in general.
MC
And that is.
AMBER
Because it is aesthetically pleasing, and they say that it is more sensual.
MC
And you would have any personal commentary on this.
AMBER a little flustered
AMBER
No.. Not really, I have talked to some people.

SCENE ->THEY START TO LOOK AT A MAP AND MC WALKS IN AND LOOKS AT THE MAP AND IS LIKE WHATS THIS, WERE NOT USING A MAP WE ARE GOING TO DO THIS COMPLETELY RANDOM.

The love story is between MC and AMBER they have been friends for a while and mostly adversarys when they have debates but there might be an underlying attraction and that is where the tention comes from, its a fun tention.

The love story breaks down into 3 connections, Physical kindness, intellectual connection and sexual compatibility, now they will never have sex but through a couple of fubmled, innuendos conversation they will get the general idea that both of them are fucked up in the same way.

The physical kindness scenes are
The foot tickling scene
The scene where MC finds out his brother tried to kill him self

The intellectual connection
The intense fight about the existence of god
The Laughing at a joke no one else got scene

The Sexual Compatibility
Answering the stupid questionnaire scene
Why do porn stars shave their “area” scene
EXT. AMBER AND MC ARE ON TOP OF THE RV, THEY DECIDED TO SLEEP OUT SIDE BECAUSE IT WAS TOO HOT IN THE RV. THEY HAVE JUST BEEN HAVING A FIGHT ABOUT THE EXISTENCE OF GOD.
AMBER jokingly says

AMBER
Hey MC tickle my feet.

MC
Okay
MC begins to tickle her feet, not much talking slowly we can see that he is making her shutter, and that she is enjoying it but because it is dark out side neither person can see the other’s face both are enjoying it tremendously.

Further down the line there has to be a series of events that leads to MC and AMBER getting involved to the point where they think that they love each other but while they are on there trip MC gets word that his brother tried to commit suicide and is in a comma at home, he blames himself for not being there and it rips him apart from AMBER
SCENE Near they end.
Ext. MC just gets off a cell phone with, he was talking to his mother. AMBER walks out and can see that his is disturbed. MC is in shock and slowly builds into rage.
AMBER
Whats wrong ... what happened
MC
My mom ... my .. my brother is in the hospital (pauses)
AMBER
What's wrong, what happened
MC
He ... tried to kill him self, his in a comma
AMBER grabs him and just holds on to MC, MC is still visibly in shock.
MC
I should have been there, I could have stopped.
AMBER
No this is not your fault. Don't even begin to believe that.
MC getting enraged throws AMBER off him and yells
MC
No, this is my fault I should have been there
MC runs away and AMBER pursues him and knocks him over
AMBER
You aren't going anywhere you just can't run away from me... from this.
MC trys to struggle but AMBER keeps him pinned
MC
Let me go you aren't apart of this.
AMBER
You made me apart of it, the day you told me you loved me.
That wasn't something we just said it was a commitment to
each other. I am not running away from you, you aren't
running away from this
MC
but this is me and my brother, let met go.
AMBER
Not until you calm down.
MC struggles some more AMBER just grabs him and holds him down.
MC keeps struggling MC slowly stops and they just sit there crying.

J.R.V.A.

I like it

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart