A poem I wrote today..

[Curving_Edge]

Wandering alone

Taking my first step on to this bleak path,
I see darkness ahead, and darkness behind,
Creeping forward to face hatreds wrath,
and to face the feelings I have in my mind.

Where once there were many,
Now there is one.

Will he be there, waiting for me,
Or will I be forced to be eternally alone,
Through the darkness I cannot see,
The future is unknown.

Where once there were many,
now there is one.

I hear screaming and yelling from battles past,
I hear it in my mind,
Though my wounds are painful, I will stand fast,
In hopes of what I may find.

Where once there were many,
Now there is one.

I see a faint glow on the path ahead,
slowly shambling right to me,
then falling onto the dirt, an eternal bed,
while I lean down to take a knee.

Where once there were many,
Now there is one

A silent prayer spoken too loud,
As I stare upon my fallen brother,
Of my actions I am not proud,
There will never be another.

Where once there were many,
now there are none.

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Please comment, i love hearing other peoples thoughts!

[J.R.V.A.]

Pretty good, thanks for sharing

[J.R.V.A.]

Actually thats really good !!!
A must reread thanks again

[Curving_Edge]

Thanks, i always love positive comments

[darkshade]

very interesting, im impressed!

[Curving_Edge]

Interesting? How so, just out of curiosity....

[fallen_angel]

I really liked it. . . kinda speaks to the darker side of me in a way. . . thank you for sharing