cybersharp

I dont usual post my poetry, and I dont believe I have posted any on tilted so I thought that it might be good to give it a try, any responses would of course be appreciated whether productive critisizm or otherwise.

1# Bright Night
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My soul shines bright,
cought in the everlasting,
cold-burning dark night,
without feel nor sight.

Beams of ever color,
light the better way,
a way to follow,
on a dark day.

As darkness gives way,
good is found again,
with hope as a freind,
eternal, never to end.

2# Family lost.
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Lost in night,
the light blight,
oblivion in like,
with stars inside.

In the dark,
I was caught,
resigned in life,
to regain sight.

You where wrong,
there was no light,
no freinds and family,
to save from blight.

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amonkie

Welcome to Tilted Lit ~ Thank you for sharing these .... I feel this forum gives us a special view into our members

I especially liked "oblivion in like, with stars inside".

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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna

msh58

i liked them

cybersharp

#3 A kiss
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A kiss for sorrow,
a kiss for pain,
never again,
taken in vain.

To honor the slain,
to honor all life,
to end this charade,
this endless double life.

A kiss to end,
a kiss to begin,
a few hundreds more,
to lend to a freind.

(A freind of mine just broke up and had the words (kiss me im heartbroken) on her display pic.)

#4 Lost
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Where am I,
where are you,
lost apart,
this will not do.

I must find,
you must search,
to be together,
this must be.

Where to go,
Where is here,
lost somewhere,
I know not where.

In circles I slowly tred,
looking back on the life,
that I have so far led,
what is lost is found.

In circles I roam,
from life to death,
and back again,
there you are,
holding me tight,
as lover and freind.

( I was feeling lonly atm) haha I never will admit that one again...

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cybersharp

Looking forward to reading some of your writting.

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