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Old 05-25-2005, 07:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think?
How can I improve the design?
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Old 05-25-2005, 07:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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And this is the detail.
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Old 05-25-2005, 07:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like...

Is she peeling an orange?
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Old 05-25-2005, 07:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Oh... I should have explained!

The theme of the contest (I don't intend on winning, or even submitting, but I thought it would be interesting to make one anyway) for early June on threadless.com is Pulp.

This was the first thing that came to mind.
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Old 05-26-2005, 07:03 AM   #5 (permalink)
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i really like it's simple design. id definitely buy that tshirt.
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Old 05-26-2005, 06:26 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Do you think there is something missing?
Are you looking to add to it?

I really like the simplicity... but if you wanted to add, how about a 'moon or sun shimmer'? Something to set off the horizon line sort of thing...
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Old 05-26-2005, 10:28 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I think its really cool... But maybe you shold make it bigger but still keep it in the right cornor... Im not sure if it would be better but it was just an idea... Keep em coming
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Old 05-27-2005, 01:16 PM   #8 (permalink)
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to tell you the truth, i think it looks kind of boring for a threadless shirt, the one color on black and white isn't really doing it for me, not that impactful, so my suggestions would be...

id take the white highlights off the body, make it bigger, maybe make the grey darker, so it's sorta hard to see the woman, and use a brighter orange for the orange
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Old 05-27-2005, 02:28 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I really like the simplicity... but if you wanted to add, how about a 'moon or sun shimmer'? Something to set off the horizon line sort of thing...
That is exactly what i was thinking . . . i love it . . . but it needs something at the top or one of the top corners to make the design seem more solid and grounded . . .

I love it though!! good job!

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Old 05-28-2005, 01:16 AM   #10 (permalink)
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The first thing that I thought when I saw the image was that it belonged on threadless. Then I read the rest of the thread and found out that it's for a competition on threadless. Heh. I think it's great.
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Old 05-28-2005, 09:27 AM   #11 (permalink)
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i agree with taking the white highlights out of the lady's silhouette. i like the contrast of the orange, but it needs something more to identify it as an orange. i just looks like orange sphere. oranges have a little texture, and sometimes that little star shaped thing on top. and even more rarely... a little green leaf still attached.
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