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cellophanedeity · 05-25-2005, 07:25 PM

What do you think?
How can I improve the design?

cellophanedeity · 05-25-2005, 07:30 PM

And this is the detail.

pinkie · 05-25-2005, 07:35 PM

I like...

Is she peeling an orange?

cellophanedeity · 05-25-2005, 07:44 PM

Oh... I should have explained!

The theme of the contest (I don't intend on winning, or even submitting, but I thought it would be interesting to make one anyway) for early June on threadless.com is Pulp.

This was the first thing that came to mind.

superredhead · 05-26-2005, 07:03 AM

i really like it's simple design. id definitely buy that tshirt.

Seeker · 05-26-2005, 06:26 PM

Do you think there is something missing?
Are you looking to add to it?

I really like the simplicity... but if you wanted to add, how about a 'moon or sun shimmer'? Something to set off the horizon line sort of thing...

Dizzet · 05-26-2005, 10:28 PM

I think its really cool... But maybe you shold make it bigger but still keep it in the right cornor... Im not sure if it would be better but it was just an idea... Keep em coming

gallopingwanker · 05-27-2005, 01:16 PM

to tell you the truth, i think it looks kind of boring for a threadless shirt, the one color on black and white isn't really doing it for me, not that impactful, so my suggestions would be...

id take the white highlights off the body, make it bigger, maybe make the grey darker, so it's sorta hard to see the woman, and use a brighter orange for the orange

Sweetpea · 05-27-2005, 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Seeker

I really like the simplicity... but if you wanted to add, how about a 'moon or sun shimmer'? Something to set off the horizon line sort of thing...

That is exactly what i was thinking . . . i love it . . . but it needs something at the top or one of the top corners to make the design seem more solid and grounded . . .

I love it though!! good job!

Sweetpea

FngKestrel · 05-28-2005, 01:16 AM

The first thing that I thought when I saw the image was that it belonged on threadless. Then I read the rest of the thread and found out that it's for a competition on threadless. Heh. I think it's great.

doodlebird · 05-28-2005, 09:27 AM

i agree with taking the white highlights out of the lady's silhouette. i like the contrast of the orange, but it needs something more to identify it as an orange. i just looks like orange sphere. oranges have a little texture, and sometimes that little star shaped thing on top. and even more rarely... a little green leaf still attached.

05-25-2005, 07:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
cellophanedeity Heliotrope Location: A warm room	T-shirt What do you think? How can I improve the design?

05-26-2005, 07:03 AM	#5 (permalink)
superredhead Crazy Location: Around So Cal.	i really like it's simple design. id definitely buy that tshirt. __________________ yawn

05-26-2005, 06:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
Seeker Getting Clearer Location: with spirit	Do you think there is something missing? Are you looking to add to it? I really like the simplicity... but if you wanted to add, how about a 'moon or sun shimmer'? Something to set off the horizon line sort of thing... __________________ *To those who wander but who are not lost...* ~ Knowledge is not something you acquire, it is something you open yourself to.

05-26-2005, 10:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
Dizzet Psycho Location: Denmark	I think its really cool... But maybe you shold make it bigger but still keep it in the right cornor... Im not sure if it would be better but it was just an idea... Keep em coming __________________ I am a pretty little Girl

05-28-2005, 09:27 AM	#11 (permalink)
doodlebird pío pío Location: on a branch about to break	i agree with taking the white highlights out of the lady's silhouette. i like the contrast of the orange, but it needs something more to identify it as an orange. i just looks like orange sphere. oranges have a little texture, and sometimes that little star shaped thing on top. and even more rarely... a little green leaf still attached. __________________ xoxo doodle

05-25-2005, 07:30 PM	#2 (permalink)
cellophanedeity Heliotrope Location: A warm room	And this is the detail.

05-25-2005, 07:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
pinkie Helplessly hoping Location: Above the stars	I like... Is she peeling an orange?

05-25-2005, 07:44 PM	#4 (permalink)
cellophanedeity Heliotrope Location: A warm room	Oh... I should have explained! The theme of the contest (I don't intend on winning, or even submitting, but I thought it would be interesting to make one anyway) for early June on threadless.com is Pulp. This was the first thing that came to mind.

05-27-2005, 01:16 PM	#8 (permalink)
gallopingwanker At the Lemonade Stand Location: in a theater near you!	to tell you the truth, i think it looks kind of boring for a threadless shirt, the one color on black and white isn't really doing it for me, not that impactful, so my suggestions would be... id take the white highlights off the body, make it bigger, maybe make the grey darker, so it's sorta hard to see the woman, and use a brighter orange for the orange

05-28-2005, 01:16 AM	#10 (permalink)
FngKestrel Junkie	The first thing that I thought when I saw the image was that it belonged on threadless. Then I read the rest of the thread and found out that it's for a competition on threadless. Heh. I think it's great.