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GoldenOuroboros · 10-22-2003, 04:46 AM

Max and Photoshop work.. You shoulda seen what I did originally.. that was just shocking

Glad I rethought things over and the way I could do them

Thanks all
Constructive Criticism pleeease

analinguist · 10-22-2003, 05:11 AM

the wings don't seem connected to the picture yet. they look like they are pasted on. you should probably work more with lighting in the picture. the wings seem like they are this glowing eminating light, yet there are barely any shadows cast or light cast on the scene around them. i also don't really like that the girl is right in the center of the picture. it seems like you could crop some excess photo off, or you could position in a different area..

GoldenOuroboros · 10-22-2003, 05:22 AM

cool thanks.. see what I can do with my extremely limited knowledge.. lol

Church · 10-22-2003, 06:47 AM

I suggest you replace the blue in the middle of the wings with a more similar skintone colour. It will help to blend the wings with the skin. Lastly, I think you might want to add some little mounds to where the wings connect with the skin, it gives more of a natural, 3D feel. Other then that, great start so far.

mb99usa · 10-22-2003, 06:51 AM

Very cool start. My suggestion would be to subdue the colors on the wings to better match the rest of the lighting in the picture.

yellowgowild · 10-22-2003, 04:41 PM

Once this is finished it will be great. I can see this gracing the desktops of many monitors.

petergriffin24 · 10-24-2003, 07:01 AM

I love the pic it looks awesome keep up the great work!!

31Friction · 10-26-2003, 06:41 PM

eh, I like it but as analinguist said, the wings look out of place

GoldenOuroboros · 10-26-2003, 08:27 PM

Yeah I understand what he is saying.. now that I actually look at the picture as a whole I can see it.. the wings look like they've been stamped on and aren't anywhere connected to the body.. so I'll eventually get around to doing something about that

thejoker130 · 10-29-2003, 07:56 PM

ooo pretty! I like very much. Someone with a dream of flying away perhaps?

Aesik · 10-29-2003, 08:18 PM

If you can figure out how to blend the subject matters better, it will turn out quite nice. But like others have said, the wings just look out of place.

Very nice concept, keep working on it!

bennyb · 10-30-2003, 04:05 PM

nice max work, keep it up

gallopingwanker · 10-31-2003, 01:01 PM

be sure to post the fixed version when you're done

Dilbert1234567 · 10-31-2003, 01:27 PM

wow thats a great job.

10-22-2003, 04:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	Fae Lurkette Max and Photoshop work.. You shoulda seen what I did originally.. that was just shocking Glad I rethought things over and the way I could do them Thanks all Constructive Criticism pleeease __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

10-22-2003, 05:11 AM	#2 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	the wings don't seem connected to the picture yet. they look like they are pasted on. you should probably work more with lighting in the picture. the wings seem like they are this glowing eminating light, yet there are barely any shadows cast or light cast on the scene around them. i also don't really like that the girl is right in the center of the picture. it seems like you could crop some excess photo off, or you could position in a different area.. __________________ end

10-22-2003, 05:22 AM	#3 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	cool thanks.. see what I can do with my extremely limited knowledge.. lol __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

10-22-2003, 06:51 AM	#5 (permalink)
mb99usa Keep on rolling. It only hurts for a little while. Location: wherever I am	Very cool start. My suggestion would be to subdue the colors on the wings to better match the rest of the lighting in the picture. __________________ So, what's your point? It's not an attitude, it's a way of life.

10-26-2003, 06:41 PM	#8 (permalink)
31Friction Addict Location: STL, MO	eh, I like it but as analinguist said, the wings look out of place __________________ "Saints need sinners." Alan Watts

10-22-2003, 06:47 AM	#4 (permalink)
Church Tilted F*ckhead Location: New Jersey	I suggest you replace the blue in the middle of the wings with a more similar skintone colour. It will help to blend the wings with the skin. Lastly, I think you might want to add some little mounds to where the wings connect with the skin, it gives more of a natural, 3D feel. Other then that, great start so far.

10-22-2003, 04:41 PM	#6 (permalink)
yellowgowild Psycho Location: Tampa	Once this is finished it will be great. I can see this gracing the desktops of many monitors.

10-24-2003, 07:01 AM	#7 (permalink)
petergriffin24 Insane	I love the pic it looks awesome keep up the great work!!

10-26-2003, 08:27 PM	#9 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	Yeah I understand what he is saying.. now that I actually look at the picture as a whole I can see it.. the wings look like they've been stamped on and aren't anywhere connected to the body.. so I'll eventually get around to doing something about that __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

10-29-2003, 07:56 PM	#10 (permalink)
thejoker130 Insane Location: slippery rock university AKA: The left ass cheek of the world	ooo pretty! I like very much. Someone with a dream of flying away perhaps? __________________ WHAT MORE CAN THE HARVEST HOPE FOR IF NOT FOR THE CARE OF THE REAPER MAN? ------------------------------------- I like you. When the world is mine your death will be quick and painless.

10-29-2003, 08:18 PM	#11 (permalink)
Aesik Tilted	If you can figure out how to blend the subject matters better, it will turn out quite nice. But like others have said, the wings just look out of place. Very nice concept, keep working on it!

10-30-2003, 04:05 PM	#12 (permalink)
bennyb Banned	nice max work, keep it up

10-31-2003, 01:01 PM	#13 (permalink)
gallopingwanker At the Lemonade Stand Location: in a theater near you!	be sure to post the fixed version when you're done

10-31-2003, 01:27 PM	#14 (permalink)
Dilbert1234567 Devils Cabana Boy Location: Central Coast CA	wow thats a great job. __________________ Donate Blood! "Love is not finding the perfect person, but learning to see an imperfect person perfectly." -Sam Keen