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Box, this prologue has quite a bit of meter, I'm curious if that was intentional or if your prose just flows that way. It gives it a very poetic slant.
Very keen imagary...I'd like to see this with all that cool spacing and italics etc. that those book guys do. I bet it would be even more dynamic.
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The sad thing is... as you get older you come to realize that you don't so much pilot your life, as you just try to hold on, in a screaming, defiant ball of white-knuckle anxious fury 
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