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jaker · 11-25-2003, 03:50 AM

My friend's little cousin's 2nd grade essay on Egyptains. Enjoy!

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This essay is about the ancient Egyptians. They lived in eygpt and they made peraymids and lived in the sand. They liked to be mummys and they also didn’t eat water or food because they live in the desert they only ate camels. They also rode on them. This is what my essay will be about. Ok here it is.

The eygptians liked to live in the desert and liked to build peryamids. They are big things that look like a triangular and they are made with bricks and they carry mummys. The peramids took a long time to make but they made them with the help of lots of slaves and they slave might be friends of moses because moses was a slave to the Egyptians. But that dosnt make all of them bad. The egyptains also liked making peramids because they didn’t have anything to do besides look at camels and eat them.

The next thing I will talk about is a mummy. A mummy is a dead Egyptians who is dead and is wrapped in white clothing and he stays that way forever in a perymaid and if you go into it to steal the mummys gold you will die because there are traps in the peramid. The Egyptians made a juice that makes the mummys be mummys and we don’t understand the mummy juice. But if you did you cold make a mummy instead of a regular dead person in today but we don’t understand mummy stuff. Ok that is all about mummys.

The other thing I will talk about is a camel the camel is the Egyptians favorite pet because they used to have giraffes as pets but they left and so the camels are theyre next favorite pet. They eat camels because that’s all there is to eat besides sand and sand can kill you. All the eyptians like to do is make peramids and camels. One camel is named Hajee I bet because that’s a good name. ok thank you that’s all.

That is what the eygptians do. They also worshiped the spinx who was a lion man statue in egpyt he dosnt have a nose. Ok. Thank you for reading about my eypgtians essay and I like to be an eypgtian for easter or Halloween. I like camels but gifaffes more if I had one I would call my girafee frank. The end.

11-25-2003, 03:50 AM	#1 (permalink)
jaker Crazy	just HAD to share this, part II My friend's little cousin's 2nd grade essay on Egyptains. Enjoy! : This essay is about the ancient Egyptians. They lived in eygpt and they made peraymids and lived in the sand. They liked to be mummys and they also didn’t eat water or food because they live in the desert they only ate camels. They also rode on them. This is what my essay will be about. Ok here it is. The eygptians liked to live in the desert and liked to build peryamids. They are big things that look like a triangular and they are made with bricks and they carry mummys. The peramids took a long time to make but they made them with the help of lots of slaves and they slave might be friends of moses because moses was a slave to the Egyptians. But that dosnt make all of them bad. The egyptains also liked making peramids because they didn’t have anything to do besides look at camels and eat them. The next thing I will talk about is a mummy. A mummy is a dead Egyptians who is dead and is wrapped in white clothing and he stays that way forever in a perymaid and if you go into it to steal the mummys gold you will die because there are traps in the peramid. The Egyptians made a juice that makes the mummys be mummys and we don’t understand the mummy juice. But if you did you cold make a mummy instead of a regular dead person in today but we don’t understand mummy stuff. Ok that is all about mummys. The other thing I will talk about is a camel the camel is the Egyptians favorite pet because they used to have giraffes as pets but they left and so the camels are theyre next favorite pet. They eat camels because that’s all there is to eat besides sand and sand can kill you. All the eyptians like to do is make peramids and camels. One camel is named Hajee I bet because that’s a good name. ok thank you that’s all. That is what the eygptians do. They also worshiped the spinx who was a lion man statue in egpyt he dosnt have a nose. Ok. Thank you for reading about my eypgtians essay and I like to be an eypgtian for easter or Halloween. I like camels but gifaffes more if I had one I would call my girafee frank. The end.