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Eldaire · 10-30-2003, 06:40 PM

Deep. I liked it a lot. But if you don't mind a small critique, the adjectives were a little repetitive. I really felt what you were trying to describe though. It was like entering a different world.

10-30-2003, 06:40 PM	#3 (permalink)
Eldaire Loser Location: Davidson College, NC	Deep. I liked it a lot. But if you don't mind a small critique, the adjectives were a little repetitive. I really felt what you were trying to describe though. It was like entering a different world.