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it is nice that you keep your color palette relatively tight, but you font treatments seem to be missing their mark. the textured font seems to be way off, and the texture that is applied to it looks like a dried feces. i don't know if that is the kind of arrival you are trying to portray. i think that grid 99 style strays away from those types of things. i agree with golden about the pointing out of the different senses or parts of the body.. it seem like you had a decent conceptual motive behind it, but i think it could be tightened up to make it stronger.
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