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Old 10-28-2003, 12:24 PM   #10 (permalink)
analinguist
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i disagree completely with mb99usa..the 3rd one looks too much like the cingular dude to hold its weight. the last one has the strongest iconic logo to it. the design is quite minimal, but really effective. i think that your font treatments seem to cohere to you logo, but i would play with the kerning and balance your letters out a little bit more. logos are tough, they require the biggest attention to detail, you have to be anal as hell with every space. make sure everything is perfectly spaced and aligned right. for example, on the first one, the a in garducci doesn't line up with the d in deli vertically. the space under the d and the u seems a bit too large, there is nothing for it to rest on.

the font used in the last one kind of bothers me, but it screams coffee shop, which is really the whole point. plus the spacing seems a bit tighter on it... A for number 4.
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