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Old 10-21-2003, 10:55 AM   #12 (permalink)
SoConfused
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Your cries and screams stay with me,
As if demanding some retribution fee.
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There are times of courage but they’re only on loan.
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It is blind minds that make the world go round,
Why is it that I listen to their sound?
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THEN HE CLOSED HIS EYES
AND LEARNED THE FREEDOM
OF THE OCEAN BIRDS.
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Nice stuff. I really liked the lines above. The one about times of courage reminds me of when my mom was going through chemotherapy, it really hit the mark. And I hope that we all get to lean back and learn the freedom of birds. Thanks and keep writing.
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