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nice...it's a great device to have the confinement of the car, and the drama that creates.
I didn't get a very good sense of the characters of tommy and jason-for a while i thought it was just two people int eh car. Look for details or themes t assign to each, so they stand apart better.
there are some great lines about the voice and the supermarkets-you've got a understated style that works well for that. thanks for sharing, it was a great read.
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