Example of third person writing in the present tense:
Joe walks down the street with his hands in his pockets.
You can't use possessive pronouns like I, we, us, our when writing in the third person. Because your story has to be in the present tense, the verbs must be in the present form, they can't be past tense. (eg. walked, ran, swam would be, walks, runs, swims).
Hope that helps.
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