Yeah I agree it really is harder. I've been workin on that one for a while now changing around every little thing sometimes erasing whole bars and starting them all over. Now the battle stuff yeah I've written a lot of it and I became pretty prestigious for it. Heres a battle verse I wrote a while back in a Crew battle against a guy named Ignorant Prodigy, who's crew was Arrestin Peace. Proof that a rhyme ain't gotta be freestyled to be good.
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Here it is
DEATH TO THE IGNORANT
Ugh Checkit the verbal method burst in rages outragous//ya heart races left in worried faces this is just the basics//can't be stopped by bars or cages Billy make ya famous magazines and newspapers find no traces once bloodshed commence on stages against such a nameless ignoramus//verbal raptor massacre this feeble actor ya verses cause burst of laughter simply after I release this written chapter//I collapse ya lungs like trash compactors if you try to reach my point of stature attackin wit the power of a nuclear reactor movin faster then the naked eye can capture//this is just my simple notion all you bitches(AP) braggin boastin turn to shit once my mouth is open and these words are spoken//ya words are chokin body broken by this simple token you will stop provokin once you notice death approachin//you shall cease to exist once a midst the forbidden scripts of this lyricist you dare entice I'm pissed I dismiss this bitch PUNCHin bricks(me) wit loosely gripped glass fists//my true skill hide subliminal behind this minimal percent of shown lyrical that slays this feeble individual//I advise to check ya visual when up against such a critical array of skill clearly not dismissible battlin hard invincible at my pinnacle ya skill is simply minuscule decreasin fast until ya ass is hardly visable//the verbal damages ya left in all shades of Amethyst underneath the bandages lies an Ignorant bitch that slowly famishes faced against the wisdom I'm commandin this attackin with the outlandishness that could turn an anarchist into a pacifist//my rap percist and after this Christopher Reeves will show more activeness//verbal crackin ribs ya body collapse and shifts while I remain tighter than virgin women activists//My spit release like blood of slashin wrists from troubled adolescent kids label wack, wacker, and wackest bitch ya full amount of adjectives//ya think ya competition? one verse that I'm conductin leaves ya chances slim like 3rd world children after liposuction//leave ya ego shrunken just a lil sumfin sumfin for all you cocky bitches buggin I could give a mothafuckin...//I was summoned with death forth comin all this waist of time redundant(I didn't need to type this much) against a rap repugnant all arise the beefs abundant //remove ya brain surgically before battle it's an urgency you have yet to burden me unaware of I obviously ya name fits you perfectly (Ignorant)//go back to your Arrestin Piece of fecal matter wit all the chitter chatter about how you bitches badder you couldn't reach my level along the top of Joshua's ladder//I arise a problem in ya blatter all you chickens dipped and battered nothings sadder then watchin bitches shatter//battle Knowledge cardiac Arrest in Peace now and forever after!!!
BYE NOW
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Just ta give you an example of my different types of writting. Thats just copied and pasted from the site I posted it at a while back in its entirety exactly as it was in the post. Hope ya like it.
Asta!!