Thread: Inside My Head
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Old 08-23-2003, 05:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
J.R.V.A.
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Location: Utah
Your words seem borrowed to me.....almost like you were taking what somone had said and writing them down. I can't quite decide if it's because the words are forced, or if it's the muppet line you used. I am reading it and trying to figure out if its really something you have written from your feelings, or if it's like a non-fiction piece you are trying to work on. It mirrors a previous post of yours from the original TFP, before the crash. Although, I am glad you are back here and starting to post here again.
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