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Your mind sounds like it goes a thousand miles an hour sometimes. Reminds me of someone I know.....
I am not a professional writer, so I cannot give critisism, espically about this piece. All I know is this piece sounds like a guy that has been beaten down, has a lot going against him, but through it all he wont give up. I liked it, I had to read it over and over.
Thanks for sharing
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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