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Old 07-13-2008, 01:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
doubleaught
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Great read! I am trying to come up with some constructive criticism... very hard. Best I can do is when I scan back over the whole document I think the formatting could use a little work. But it didn't detract from the story. Thank you for posting
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