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Originally Posted by gallopingwanker
I feel the text is way too tall and not as legible as it could be, the bold outline on the font causes confusion, the leaf looks painted on, also criminology is so bold and annoying it makes the university text seem like it's not there.
That's my critique.
Also, is that tint of red the actual schools color?
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Maybe not too tall, just too tight (my first impression). I'm such a dumb American...I thought that was blood spattering, not a maple leaf
The outline is a tad thick, perhaps 1px down, which would increase the empty space between the lettering(the 'i's almost disappear as it stands). Many years ago my art teacher told us that when vertical letter meets vertical letter, they will always appear closer, so you should eyeball the space between by using the example of the indentation of the R to the I, not the outward curve. The opposite would apply to the relationship between the L and the O...see how they look further apart than the rest of the word? Those two should almost be touching.
Since I always take the liberty.....