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Old 03-18-2006, 03:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
tecoyah
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I agree....very well done, and worth reading all the way through. Excellent wrap up and good Body to the story. You even managed to form the main characters quite well considering the length of a short story.

I am pleasantly impressed....thank You.
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