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i agree with asaris. ur sentences could use some work.
try to tie your sentences together better. where you would use words like "furthermore, therefore, in addition, on the other hand, etc" start off a sentence with a "de plus," or something. and throw in a "car" (english for since).
some other random stuff:
"Son fils est une droguée".....fils is male, so it should be un drogué
"Ils font yaourts dans France"......sould be "du yaourts en France"
"La société vend yaourts à tout le monde." its du yaourts, and ur saying they sell yaourts to everyone, remove the "à tout le monde"
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