I am absolutely the last person in the world that should mention this -- but I'm gonna anyhow...
This is your only chance to make a first impression. Take a few seconds and spell check the ad, and make sure that the sentence structure is correct. You've taken the extra step that a lot of guys don't do in a personal ad, that is, you've written stuff about yourself, go the extra step, and make it look right. (You dare to call yourself half- Italian, but then spell Italian wrong -- Tony Soprano needs to talk to you.
(Spelling advice offered from a really bad speller, what a world we live in)
You sound like a nice guy, it's a great picture (you look happy in it-- happy guys are good). Nice guys are good. Again, this is your only chance to make a first impression, you need something to make them say - Hey, I want to wink at him... I need to think about what that is...