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If you just wanted praise you should've posted it on your mothers fridge.
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12-12-2004, 04:11 AM
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marsfyre
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Crit away! This is one I've revised several times, so it will be interesting to see what crits I get ^__^ (so i can revise it a fourth time of course ;D
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