bug.jpg
chickensymbol.jpg
gymquestpointy.jpg
gymquestswoosh.jpg
ten50square.jpg
These are my favorites. Real nice job.
I'm rather intrigued by the whole "identity design" aspects of graphic/digital design. It's something we touch every now and again in my classes. I wish I had more experience with it. By and large, these designs are clean and refined. I dig 'em.
Some semi-educated suggestions:
gibsondrip.jpg: maybe a little bit more contrast between SUPPLY and INC.
gibsonshadow.jpg: Seems like you could bring IBSON closer to the G, and maybe even bring the G over a little to left so that is visually syncs more with that over-hanging tail of the S andthat should bring the right-hand side of the N in GIBSON more in line with the rhs of Y in SUPPLY
glenblue.jpg: neat idea, but I'm not sure how successful it is here.
glenhouse.jpg: what if the two text lines were flushly right-justified? And then the box could be cropped to fit? The text is kinda floaty right now. Nice contrast of thick and thin with Glen Schofield, though.
gymquestdots.jpg: Nice typeface and nice use of spacing, and nice hierarchy with the dots. But be careful with those dots. They're a little too reminiscent of recent Microsoft stylings for my comfort.
PS. I really like your site design.
Last edited by exizldelfuego; 12-08-2004 at 10:56 PM..
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