Thanks for the feedback amonkie
My new friend is quite an artist and she inspires me to be more artistic and create more poetic sentences, even just talking to her. So i'll probably be adding to this thread more often now. Yep how i read, and write poetry is always influenced by my mood at the time. Belated thanks also to J.R.V.A.
PS I was talking to my friend the other day and i said something which i instantly caught as a good lyric so i am really wanting to build a poem around that one lyric now. I'll let you know what it is in the next instalment, hopefully it'll grow into something good