wow... I've certainly never thought of that perspective for a poem before. Not quite rhyming, but the flow sort of reminds me of a painter - a smooth swish here, a short or long dab here. I like it 
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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