I don't think you shoudl change anything about this. The emission of details adds to the mystery of it all which is what this is about. If we knew everything then we'd know that her real secret was that she loved you and that it wasn't a lie. Do you understand what I'm trying to say? I don't think you should change this at all. I like how you said that she was really the one who was in power in the sexual relationship. I knew that without you saying it, but putting it into words was satisfying for me as a reader.
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