Thread: Let me be
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Old 04-10-2004, 10:33 PM   #9 (permalink)
Memnoch
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"I want to ask you why
I want to know what broke inside
Why you felt the need to lie"

I found this particular set of verse to be incredibly well balanced and rhymed. The rhythm flows *just right*. I love the imagery of "what broke inside".
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