Help me out, write me some heavy metal lyrics - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

Zephyr66 · 01-16-2005, 05:30 PM

I dunno if this would go in music, but I thought I'd get better results here.

Ok, here's the deal, I have a power metal song composed and I want some lyrics. I can't write lyrics worth shit, so I thought I would employ this boards help. I have the vocal melodies already written out, but they aren't cast in stone. What I'm mostly looking for are corny Dragonforce-esque lyrics about slaying dragons or the power of one man or something, but I'll take anything. I think I'm gonna wait to see what kind of a responce i get before posting the song. Oh yeah and I have it in MIDI and MP3 (generated using soundfonts). So is anyone in?

K-Wise · 01-16-2005, 05:43 PM

Hmm I suppose I could try it out if I could hear the music you have. Dragons though..not really my thing but wouldn't be the first time I wrote about a bizzare subject haha. I'd do it just for fun but not promising anything great...or maybe even good for that matter

Asta!!

Zephyr66 · 01-16-2005, 05:51 PM

not really litterally dragons, but stereotypical power metal lyrics, bands like dragonforce, edguy, angra, that stuff

K-Wise · 01-16-2005, 09:03 PM

Yeah I know what you mean.

Asta!!

Tophat665 · 01-16-2005, 09:13 PM

<i>My love for you is like a truck
BERSERKER
Would you like some making fuck
BERSERKER!!!!</i>

Sorry, that just sprang to mind immediately.

Zephyr66 · 01-17-2005, 01:14 PM

Well, here is the MIDI if anyone wants to give this a try, you can really write whatever you want, I would just prefer nothing angsty

http://www.geocities.com/ce_5250/new_song.mid

(incase you can't tell, the choiry sounding thing is the vocal melody)

Dostoevsky · 01-18-2005, 04:20 AM

Dude, the song rocks!!! If we can come up with some catchy lyrics, that shit could be tight. I may listen too it a few more times and try to come up with something.

Zephyr66 · 01-18-2005, 04:27 PM

thanks, everybody tells me im pretty good at writing music, but I'm terrible at writing lyrics, so i decided to try here
oh and I'm sure nobody cares, but I play bass and I'm looking for a couple of guitarists at school so i can form a band

tecoyah · 01-23-2005, 07:39 AM

Drinking in the taste of you ....I feel
I'm getting into you
Knowing, what I do of you....So real
I'm getting into you
Take this little chunk of me and run with it....have fun with it

Dont pretend you really care about whats left of it....and dont forget

I'm getting into you.......I know

As much as you abuse my love ....dont go, DONT GO

-sorta works anyway-

Zephyr66 · 01-29-2005, 10:20 PM

Thats pretty good Tecoyah, thanks for the halping hand. I don't know exactly what I'm gonna do with the song, but I've got forever to figure it out

mojodragon · 01-30-2005, 06:14 AM

Slayer dons armor and points his horse into the night
Travels down lonely road to inevitable fight
Townspeople lock their doors and huddle inside in fright
Slayer marches into world devoid of all light

Dragon sleeps in unknowing peaceful rest in his lair
Dreaming of feedings and burnings, so much unaware
Death rides a pale horse, he’s coming to get you, beware
Nothing can stop him, the reaper is taking his share

With mighty thrust of double blade Slayer awakens his prey
Blood flows and steel blows and flame grows throughout the day
With tortured shriek Dragon succumbs to the ultimate fate
Slayer collapses beside him in victory laden with pain

Zephyr66 · 01-30-2005, 02:22 PM

haha, fuckin awesome man.
For the record, I don't have an obsession with dragons or anything, it just seems to fit with the song for me

mojodragon · 01-30-2005, 02:34 PM

I must admit, the topic kind of threw me, but that's what came to me

01-16-2005, 05:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
Zephyr66 My custom title's the shit! Location: Canada	Help me out, write me some heavy metal lyrics I dunno if this would go in music, but I thought I'd get better results here. Ok, here's the deal, I have a power metal song composed and I want some lyrics. I can't write lyrics worth shit, so I thought I would employ this boards help. I have the vocal melodies already written out, but they aren't cast in stone. What I'm mostly looking for are corny Dragonforce-esque lyrics about slaying dragons or the power of one man or something, but I'll take anything. I think I'm gonna wait to see what kind of a responce i get before posting the song. Oh yeah and I have it in MIDI and MP3 (generated using soundfonts). So is anyone in? Last edited by Zephyr66; 01-16-2005 at 05:35 PM..

01-16-2005, 05:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Hmm I suppose I could try it out if I could hear the music you have. Dragons though..not really my thing but wouldn't be the first time I wrote about a bizzare subject haha. I'd do it just for fun but not promising anything great...or maybe even good for that matter Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

01-16-2005, 09:03 PM	#4 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Yeah I know what you mean. Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

01-16-2005, 09:13 PM	#5 (permalink)
Tophat665 Minion of the scaléd ones Location: Northeast Jesusland	<i>My love for you is like a truck BERSERKER Would you like some making fuck BERSERKER!!!!</i> Sorry, that just sprang to mind immediately. __________________ Light a man a fire, and he will be warm while it burns. Set a man on fire, and he will be warm for the rest of his life.

01-18-2005, 04:20 AM	#7 (permalink)
Dostoevsky Psycho Location: Macon, GA	Dude, the song rocks!!! If we can come up with some catchy lyrics, that shit could be tight. I may listen too it a few more times and try to come up with something. __________________ Pride is the recognition of the fact that you are your own highest value and, like all of man’s values, it has to be earned. It is not advisable, James, to venture unsolicited opinions. You should spare yourself the embarrassing discovery of their exact value to your listener. Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged

01-16-2005, 05:51 PM	#3 (permalink)
Zephyr66 My custom title's the shit! Location: Canada	not really litterally dragons, but stereotypical power metal lyrics, bands like dragonforce, edguy, angra, that stuff

01-17-2005, 01:14 PM	#6 (permalink)
Zephyr66 My custom title's the shit! Location: Canada	Well, here is the MIDI if anyone wants to give this a try, you can really write whatever you want, I would just prefer nothing angsty http://www.geocities.com/ce_5250/new_song.mid (incase you can't tell, the choiry sounding thing is the vocal melody)

01-18-2005, 04:27 PM	#8 (permalink)
Zephyr66 My custom title's the shit! Location: Canada	thanks, everybody tells me im pretty good at writing music, but I'm terrible at writing lyrics, so i decided to try here oh and I'm sure nobody cares, but I play bass and I'm looking for a couple of guitarists at school so i can form a band Last edited by Zephyr66; 01-18-2005 at 04:30 PM..

01-23-2005, 07:39 AM	#9 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Drinking in the taste of you ....I feel I'm getting into you Knowing, what I do of you....So real I'm getting into you Take this little chunk of me and run with it....have fun with it Dont pretend you really care about whats left of it....and dont forget I'm getting into you.......I know As much as you abuse my love ....dont go, DONT GO -sorta works anyway- __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

01-29-2005, 10:20 PM	#10 (permalink)
Zephyr66 My custom title's the shit! Location: Canada	Thats pretty good Tecoyah, thanks for the halping hand. I don't know exactly what I'm gonna do with the song, but I've got forever to figure it out

01-30-2005, 06:14 AM	#11 (permalink)
mojodragon Darth Mojo Location: Right behind you...	Song Lyrics - Cradle of Filth style Slayer dons armor and points his horse into the night Travels down lonely road to inevitable fight Townspeople lock their doors and huddle inside in fright Slayer marches into world devoid of all light Dragon sleeps in unknowing peaceful rest in his lair Dreaming of feedings and burnings, so much unaware Death rides a pale horse, he’s coming to get you, beware Nothing can stop him, the reaper is taking his share With mighty thrust of double blade Slayer awakens his prey Blood flows and steel blows and flame grows throughout the day With tortured shriek Dragon succumbs to the ultimate fate Slayer collapses beside him in victory laden with pain

01-30-2005, 02:22 PM	#12 (permalink)
Zephyr66 My custom title's the shit! Location: Canada	haha, fuckin awesome man. For the record, I don't have an obsession with dragons or anything, it just seems to fit with the song for me

01-30-2005, 02:34 PM	#13 (permalink)
mojodragon Darth Mojo Location: Right behind you...	I must admit, the topic kind of threw me, but that's what came to me