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A couple quickies
Forever
On the horizon I see the dusk, Sun slipping slowly toward night’s trust Evening’s wind whispers in light touch Urging me to bare truth’s hush Yesterday aside me you traveled along Today alone I journey this life’s song, Memories, pictures, or so it seems The last place I see you is in my dreams. Morning’s come with an answer to find If my thought ever crosses your mind. As days, months, years forever climb, Your beautiful memory will outlive time Waterways He is a river within her, His rivulets sparse at start Through his tributaries are many, receding, As life ebbs and flows in her heart. Yet he courses always inside her, His tide overcomes her in mind. Waves wash over her wanting Querying where she can find A stream to channel her passion, A brook to barter her yearn, A sea to consume her longing, A shore on which to return. |
I had begun to say I love "Forever."
And then I read "Waterways" ... Both a great portayal of the heart. |
In the first poem "Forever" do you mean "aside" or "beside?" They may mean the same thing, but I didn't think they did.
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GREAT STUFF
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little I meant aside I thought it flowed better. Thanks.
I had to change my name: technical issues. |
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