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Old 07-29-2004, 08:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: On a couch before a screen
Reasons to why it ended . . .

A bit amatuerish, wrote it in a hurry. Still painful anyways. Enjoy. Once again, it is untitled



I’m sorry for the things, I’ve done you wrong,
I thought myself of the future, very much long,
The length was cut short by me, with the sharpest of scissors,
At least the fire was put out, before we were ashen
Else, ending it tomorrow would’ve left a severe wound,
As the fire of love may have burnt us bound.
It was selfish to say that I was more than you,
The future was bleak, dark and dim, like a world built for fools.
I couldn’t see anything with my eyes,
I was blinded by your ties.
Efforts and sacrifices put to waste
Expected smiles so vain reflect a sharp tongue.
Stepped on, ignored, I hide a bleeding heart.
Time once put on you, studies in second place,
Parents who once cared not seemed to care much more.
A month of restlessness have given much thought, before
The journey was cut short.

There is a lot more than the eyes can see,
I cannot feel you and you cannot feel me,
I’ll move on with life and let things be,
Hopefully with the shadow of your grace upon me

If I have scarred your past,
Likewise you have scarred mine.

-Wee Sim
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