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Esen · 07-19-2004, 04:39 PM

Into the room

She came into the room poisoning me
tying me into rings of confusion,
illusion
the sweet sanity of upset dreams being siphoned from your inner peace-
your inner safety,
Her love is malnourished and bleeding.
she leaves the scent of her desire corroding the flesh of my lips.
Release me!
Let your rotted words leave me in hunger no more.
a loaf of bread a thimble of juice,
a revelation that sanity is not all for void and nil.
Her hair tightens under the belly of my chin
squeezing and taunting the sweet embers of my own poisonous sin.
Release me, let me go, let me breath.
She straddles my spirit I buckle from her harness
convulse and shaking to spin from the deep solitude that if she leaves I will truly be alone.
she lays there and laughs.

tecoyah · 07-19-2004, 05:09 PM

Excellent....that was inspired Chauncey.

thebeat · 07-19-2004, 05:26 PM

Woah....I'm very impressed, that was really great!!

ForgottenKnight · 07-23-2004, 10:02 PM

Excellent!

Thanks for sharing your work!

07-19-2004, 04:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Into the room Into the room She came into the room poisoning me tying me into rings of confusion, illusion the sweet sanity of upset dreams being siphoned from your inner peace- your inner safety, Her love is malnourished and bleeding. she leaves the scent of her desire corroding the flesh of my lips. Release me! Let your rotted words leave me in hunger no more. a loaf of bread a thimble of juice, a revelation that sanity is not all for void and nil. Her hair tightens under the belly of my chin squeezing and taunting the sweet embers of my own poisonous sin. Release me, let me go, let me breath. She straddles my spirit I buckle from her harness convulse and shaking to spin from the deep solitude that if she leaves I will truly be alone. she lays there and laughs. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

07-19-2004, 05:09 PM	#2 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Excellent....that was inspired Chauncey. __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

07-19-2004, 05:26 PM	#3 (permalink)
thebeat Insane Location: Deep South	Woah....I'm very impressed, that was really great!! __________________ random

07-23-2004, 10:02 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Excellent! Thanks for sharing your work! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"