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tecoyah 06-11-2004 02:57 AM

Venom
 
Blatant, eyes accusing my soul of falsehood
How you dare my anger to lash
Blush if you will at retribution
Shy away from my reality
Vacant, is the stare in your disillusioned eyes
Thrusting upon my heart the stings’ venom
This poison is for you, imbibe
Masochist that you are
Taste the salt of infliction
Smell this decay
Hear the cries of dead passion
See what you are
See what I see thru my pain

ForgottenKnight 06-12-2004 12:22 AM

Definately shows an angry, perhaps hateful, pain. Good job!

J.R.V.A. 06-12-2004 10:59 AM

Re: Venom
 
Quote:

Originally posted by tecoyah
Blatant, eyes accusing my soul of falsehood
How you dare my anger to lash
Blush if you will at retribution
Shy away from my reality
Vacant, is the stare in your disillusioned eyes
Thrusting upon my heart the stings’ venom
This poison is for you, imbibe
Masochist that you are
Taste the salt of infliction
Smell this decay
Hear the cries of dead passion
See what you are
See what I see thru my pain

Oh my..... This had me sitting o the edge of my chair with the feelings rushing out...Thanks for sharing it

vonstalhein 06-12-2004 12:55 PM

Yes! Ah! Dig that!


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