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Kagemusha222 · 11-02-2004, 09:40 PM

I sit and spit til my soul hurts
filled with flashes of light from divine words
the blessings pool under my tounge only to
hit the ground in showers of divinity
the grains of my thoughts shift under
the winds of reason
as the moons of my imaginataion exlipse
the blazing sun of my dreams
bathing my mindscape in
beautiful glimmering shades of darkness
here I frolic with my senses
tasting touch while hearing smell
elevated I seem to reach the divine
with the height of the tides
in the dream sea
only to be pulled back in the trough
by an undercurrent of doubt

K-Wise · 11-02-2004, 09:49 PM

This was short but quite good.

Quote:

beautiful glimmering shades of darkness
here I frolic with my senses
tasting touch while hearing smell

I love that line right there. I just think it's quite clever. Keep em comin

Asta!!

amonkie · 11-03-2004, 10:51 AM

The reference to grains of thought shifting is really an awesome mental picture - it relates so much to how we are changed the by things around us. Thanks for sharing!

Kagemusha222 · 11-04-2004, 04:37 PM

Thanks for responding! I have a ton of other poems to post so I will keep them coming.

11-02-2004, 09:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
Kagemusha222 Upright Location: The other side of your brain	Divine Words (a poem) I sit and spit til my soul hurts filled with flashes of light from divine words the blessings pool under my tounge only to hit the ground in showers of divinity the grains of my thoughts shift under the winds of reason as the moons of my imaginataion exlipse the blazing sun of my dreams bathing my mindscape in beautiful glimmering shades of darkness here I frolic with my senses tasting touch while hearing smell elevated I seem to reach the divine with the height of the tides in the dream sea only to be pulled back in the trough by an undercurrent of doubt

11-03-2004, 10:51 AM	#3 (permalink)
amonkie Drifting Administrator Location: Windy City	The reference to grains of thought shifting is really an awesome mental picture - it relates so much to how we are changed the by things around us. Thanks for sharing! __________________ Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna

11-04-2004, 04:37 PM	#4 (permalink)
Kagemusha222 Upright Location: The other side of your brain	Thanks for responding! I have a ton of other poems to post so I will keep them coming.