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CheeseButtons · 04-29-2004, 10:25 PM

Have you ever held a rose pedal
only to feel it wither?
Have you ever caught a snow flake
only to see it melt?
how fragile this is
how scared am i
I hold you now so carefully
I see your beauty
I hold you close

please stay

vonstalhein · 05-02-2004, 12:05 PM

Oh that sounds like a song. I mean, like it could be. Tear jerker...*sniffles*
I liked it by the way.

J.R.V.A. · 05-06-2004, 01:14 PM

I liked it too

ZenkiChica · 05-06-2004, 03:12 PM

i love it

losthellhound · 05-08-2004, 08:39 AM

very well done. Things like this are the reasons why I come to Tilted Lit.

sillygirl · 05-18-2004, 11:07 PM

CB, you surprise me every time I read your writing

tecoyah · 05-25-2004, 03:22 PM

Very nice...*snif*

04-29-2004, 10:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
CheeseButtons Crazy Location: 1000 miles from nowhere	Fragile Have you ever held a rose pedal only to feel it wither? Have you ever caught a snow flake only to see it melt? how fragile this is how scared am i I hold you now so carefully I see your beauty I hold you close please stay __________________ Sorrow is better than laughter, because a sad face is good for the heart. -Ecclesiastes 7:3

05-02-2004, 12:05 PM	#2 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	Oh that sounds like a song. I mean, like it could be. Tear jerker...sniffles I liked it by the way. __________________ No Win No Fee

05-06-2004, 01:14 PM	#3 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	I liked it too __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

05-08-2004, 08:39 AM	#5 (permalink)
losthellhound Thats MR. Muffin Face now Location: Everywhere work sends me	very well done. Things like this are the reasons why I come to Tilted Lit. __________________ "Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?" -- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death

05-18-2004, 11:07 PM	#6 (permalink)
sillygirl Newlywed Location: at home	CB, you surprise me every time I read your writing __________________ Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly-Rose Franken ....absence makes me miss him more...

05-06-2004, 03:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
ZenkiChica Upright	i love it

05-25-2004, 03:22 PM	#7 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Very nice...snif __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha