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Memnoch · 04-10-2004, 10:58 PM

I am fading from this world
And I don't ever want to look back
I can't find you in this world
I don't ever want to look back

Pain is so unreal to me
I can't see the blood that flows
Serenity is apathy
I have ceased to grow

I could never see
This synergy
Of you and me
I could never be
Never be
Never see

I have plunged head first
Into the waters of complacence
I am drowning in
A sea of tears as I awaken

I will never know
Your touch of love, your touch of longing
I will never know
A sense of caring, of belonging

Sadness fills my memories
Tainted by my enemies
Taken from me violently
Emotionless I shield my eyes.

ForgottenKnight · 04-12-2004, 08:05 PM

I know how you feel. Thanks for putting it into words.

ariekitten · 04-18-2004, 01:57 AM

that isnt a poem, its a song. well its both. that has an awesome rhythm, you should put some music to it.....

thx for sharing

Esen · 04-19-2004, 02:55 PM

Yea. I must agree, it would make a great ssong as well as a poem

Memnoch · 04-19-2004, 05:59 PM

Ariekitten and Chauncey - thanks so much for the suggestion...I just plucked out a pretty decent tab on my bass for the song! It sounds pretty decent.

04-10-2004, 10:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	I could never I am fading from this world And I don't ever want to look back I can't find you in this world I don't ever want to look back Pain is so unreal to me I can't see the blood that flows Serenity is apathy I have ceased to grow I could never see This synergy Of you and me I could never be Never be Never see I have plunged head first Into the waters of complacence I am drowning in A sea of tears as I awaken I will never know Your touch of love, your touch of longing I will never know A sense of caring, of belonging Sadness fills my memories Tainted by my enemies Taken from me violently Emotionless I shield my eyes. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang. Last edited by Memnoch; 04-11-2004 at 02:23 PM..

04-12-2004, 08:05 PM	#2 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I know how you feel. Thanks for putting it into words. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

04-18-2004, 01:57 AM	#3 (permalink)
ariekitten bAck iN aCtiOn! Location: in my imagination	that isnt a poem, its a song. well its both. that has an awesome rhythm, you should put some music to it..... thx for sharing __________________ I am known as Valentinez Alkalinella Xifax Sicidabohertz Gombigobilla Blue Stradivari Talentrent Pierre Andri Charton-Haymoss Ivanovici Baldeus George Doitzel Kaiser III. Don't hesitate to call. ~Vash, Trigun >'.'< kitty kitty, meow ^..^~

04-19-2004, 02:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Yea. I must agree, it would make a great ssong as well as a poem __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

04-19-2004, 05:59 PM	#5 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	Ariekitten and Chauncey - thanks so much for the suggestion...I just plucked out a pretty decent tab on my bass for the song! It sounds pretty decent. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.