A little poem written while drunk - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

Pennington · 07-21-2003, 03:56 PM

Take me back,
and then you'll see.
See me,
see the wretch you've made.

You won't ever see me.
and I'll never return.
Return to you
to stand in your grace.

You're too perfect
and I can't compare.
Compare to your beauty,
compare to your hate.

Please take me back,
and I'll do what I want.
I want to be with you.
I want to bash your head in with a mother fucking rock.

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I honestly have no idea who/what this is about.

fallen_angel · 07-21-2003, 06:13 PM

you know i feel the same way right now. . . thank you for expressing it for me
i really like the last line by the way

teflonian · 07-21-2003, 06:18 PM

Wow! Such strong emotions for not knowing who it is about. Much better than anything I have ever come up with while intoxicated. Good stuff..

J.R.V.A. · 07-24-2003, 06:25 AM

Drink more lol That was good, thanks

sportsrule101 · 07-24-2003, 11:11 AM

lots of anger thats for sure. Still very entertaining, so whos it about?

maximus · 07-24-2003, 06:17 PM

that pretty much sums up how i feel right now.....

07-21-2003, 03:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
Pennington Banned Location: Autonomous Zone	A little poem written while drunk Take me back, and then you'll see. See me, see the wretch you've made. You won't ever see me. and I'll never return. Return to you to stand in your grace. You're too perfect and I can't compare. Compare to your beauty, compare to your hate. Please take me back, and I'll do what I want. I want to be with you. I want to bash your head in with a mother fucking rock. -------------- I honestly have no idea who/what this is about.

07-21-2003, 06:13 PM	#2 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	you know i feel the same way right now. . . thank you for expressing it for me i really like the last line by the way __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

07-24-2003, 06:25 AM	#4 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Drink more lol That was good, thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

07-24-2003, 11:11 AM	#5 (permalink)
sportsrule101 Insane	lots of anger thats for sure. Still very entertaining, so whos it about? __________________ winning isn't everything but losing isn't anything

07-24-2003, 06:17 PM	#6 (permalink)
maximus Crazy Location: Pa	that pretty much sums up how i feel right now..... __________________ i don't want to be lonely, i just want to be alone.

07-21-2003, 06:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
teflonian Appreciative Location: Paradise	Wow! Such strong emotions for not knowing who it is about. Much better than anything I have ever come up with while intoxicated. Good stuff..